Dear Diary,
I'm don't know what to do. My parents want me to break up with my boyfriend even though I know he is the one. I've never felt this way about anyone before and because my parents don't know anything about him or what he has been through they are threatening to disown me for liking him. I bet they never had anyone doing this to them when my parents started dating, they know im smart enough to make up my own mind and make the right decision. He is this nicest boy I have ever met and he treats me like a princess, I hardly see what is wrong with that.
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Emily,
ReplyDeleteYou have an interesting idea to start with but I think you could provide greater detail in your response. Can you contemplate on why they might have such an issue with the relationship?
Ultimately, I would like to see a response that shows greater depth.
Also, be vigilant about proof-reading and editing. There are some silly mistakes that need to be identified and addressed.